I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Hansell.
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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 27 June 2012
Wednesday, 20 June 2012
Speech Reflection
How did you feel about presenting your speech to the class?
I felt shy because I have never done a speech to a group of children.
What was the hardest part about preparing a speech?
Choosing the topic was the hardest part because there was lots of things to chose from.
What did you enjoy most about speeches?
That they can be really affective to some people.
How could you improve your speech making next time?
By using more affective things on my next speech.like More interesting facts,powerful words and punctuation.
Shade in the squares to give your speech a rating out of TEN:
I felt shy because I have never done a speech to a group of children.
What was the hardest part about preparing a speech?
Choosing the topic was the hardest part because there was lots of things to chose from.
What did you enjoy most about speeches?
That they can be really affective to some people.
How could you improve your speech making next time?
By using more affective things on my next speech.like More interesting facts,powerful words and punctuation.
Shade in the squares to give your speech a rating out of TEN:
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Monday, 26 March 2012
The dangerous wolf with the hard working farmer
Far beyond the myths of time...
A farmer called peter t was mowing the long grass on his farm until...he cut a wolf's eye on accident.He was frightened and scared of the sharp pointy teeth.The wolf was as tall as a door,he wanted revenge of what the farmer had done,also he was vicious and he growled at him with power.
The farmer thought that he could lose the wolf by going down a steep hill.The farmer made a bad choice to go down the hill because....there were heaps of prickles and thorns.That gave the farmer an idea.
The farmers idea was to trick the wolf and make him get thorns on himself.His plan worked so the wolf hid in the rest of the long grass until the farmer came out.
The farmer didn’t come out for ten years.By the time he came out he saw that the grass was long again so he had to be careful of the wolf.The wolf showed before his eyes.The wolf wanted to be friends but the wolf tricked the farmer and ran out of town.
The farmer never came back to that place and the wolf lived his life with one broken eye.
A farmer called peter t was mowing the long grass on his farm until...he cut a wolf's eye on accident.He was frightened and scared of the sharp pointy teeth.The wolf was as tall as a door,he wanted revenge of what the farmer had done,also he was vicious and he growled at him with power.
The farmer thought that he could lose the wolf by going down a steep hill.The farmer made a bad choice to go down the hill because....there were heaps of prickles and thorns.That gave the farmer an idea.
The farmers idea was to trick the wolf and make him get thorns on himself.His plan worked so the wolf hid in the rest of the long grass until the farmer came out.
The farmer didn’t come out for ten years.By the time he came out he saw that the grass was long again so he had to be careful of the wolf.The wolf showed before his eyes.The wolf wanted to be friends but the wolf tricked the farmer and ran out of town.
The farmer never came back to that place and the wolf lived his life with one broken eye.
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